Monday, March 21, 2005

Rosie O' Donnell Post

This is my attempt at poetry that sounds like Rosie's.

Monday is warm
on the skin
of my face

The face of a child
the mind of an old woman
Still

Still is the sound of the world
that I feel in my bones
As I shake like a leaf

Contradictions like those
That were once just memories
Memories of more

And when I think of the time
How it spins and weaves it's way
Through the hourglass

I feel peace
peace of mind and peace of sole (as in the fish)

How did I do? :)

16 comments:

Kim said...

Bravo!

*applause*

Robin Alexa said...

*bows*

Anti-Blogger said...

*sniff*

It is like you have looked into my heart. Except for the sole part...I prefer Mrs. Pauls halibut fish sticks. :)

Robin Alexa said...

It's good I know, but I think it might need some umlauts to spice it up a bit. You know, some flare.

Jeff Phillips said...

Still is the sound of the world
that I feel in my bones
As I shake like a leaf



Maybe you're just having a reaction to your allergy medicine.

- Jeff

mcgibfried said...

very nice

Brandon said...

i think you're ready for your own talk show and line of frozen food products.

Heather said...

i dig it. more than rosie's.

i like writing stuff like that once and awhile too.

even though my ex boyfriend called my last stuff "moody tripe".

the bastard.

Robin M said...

i think you did better than Rosie... your poem actually makes SENSE! Hers are more abstract and random. I don't get her. Maybe I'm the only one who feels this way...?

Jeff Phillips said...

In sixth grade, I wrote a Haiku and won the class prize:

In my penny goes
Out comes a big red gumball-
It drops to the floor.


Interestingly, the aforementioned prose turned out to be pretty much the theme for the rest of my life.

:-)


- Jeff

Robin Alexa said...

Jeff - I gotta get me some of your allergy meds...they sound like a trip :)

Brando - Will you be my agent?

Heather - One person's "moody tripe is another person's Shakespeare.

Robin - I think "peace in my sole (as in fish)" should maybe be dropped in order for it to make sense.

Robin Alexa said...

And Jeff again - I've always wanted to be a fishergirl (see 50 things) so maybe "Peace in my sole" does make sense! That's it...I am SO buying a boat.

Robin said...

Not a big Rosie fan so I'm not sure how your prose relates to her work, BUT "peace in my sole" is by far one of the wittier, wackier things I've read in awhile... Do you ever read something and have it stick in your head for weeks on end? Well this will stick, and I will curse and bless you all at the same time.

Joy said...

so much cooler than rosie's stuff which scares me.

Anonymous said...

And the crowd goes wild!! That was beeee-u-tee-ful!!! Now they can make a doll with your likeness!

BTW...WTF is up with Rosie. I think she is just too busy to use puncuation. Fame does strange things to people. Hey Robin, if I ever get that famous, would you kick me in the butt if i ever stop using my spellcheck?

Robin Alexa said...

Oh for sure...but kicking is my favourite thing to do besides sucking the coating off a Mars bar.